假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim来信询问你毕业后的暑期安排。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,谈谈你的打算及原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
得分:评阅中 平均得分:-
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国好友Jim写封电子邮件,谈谈你毕业后的暑期安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将到来的:upcoming→forthcoming
另外:moreover→besides
相关的:relevant→related
有用的:beneficial→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’d like to share with you my plans for the upcoming summer vacation.
拓展句:I’d like to share with you my plans for the summer vacation which is drawing near.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning some new skills is also on my agenda. (运用了动名词作主语)
[高分句型2] Passionate about programming, I’m planning to attend relevant online courses to take my programming skills to the next level, which will be beneficial for my future major. (运用了形容词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)