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I’m sorry to tell you about some changes. I had planned to attend the camp in July, but now I can’t make it because our school has organized a volunteer activity in the summer vacation. I am interested in it and want to take part in it first. I wonder if I can register for the summer camp in August. I apologize for the inconvenience I have caused. Looking forward to your early reply!
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